Jay 2 da L-A

[jay2dala]

Jay 2 Da L- A the hottest chick to touch a mic
Ya Rappin on all that oochie koochie shit cuz ya dyke/1
I'll strong arm a hoe like I'm Jackie-O
yo thinkin you pac just cuz you been twistin the dro/2
your a lil dick nigga with not a lot clout
you call me a bitch one more 'gain I'll show you what I'm bout/3
I'm like a nigga, gettin head's the only thing on my mind
I'll let him think he beat it up as long as i get out on time/4
I might as well be micheal Jackson the way these mothers be actin
Touchin' there all there son's, For permission I'm not askin/5

Just 5 bars to introduce myself. I'm new to rappin and I'm new to online forums too

[MitcH]

this was pretty good for some1 new to this...not bad at all...keep at it tho...